Monday, August 31, 2009

Random Bit Of Writing

Here's a random bit of writing I wrote today... written Brian-Miller-style, sort of. XD



Courage

Deep sigh.

Watch me.

Okay, here we go.

Striding down the hall.

Breathe in.

And out.

Hi.

Hi.

You want to...

In.

And out.

Yes?

Walk with me?

In.

And out.

Biting lips.

Lost in deep eyes,

sweet pools.

Sure.

Heart pounding,

smile bright.

Okay.

Nodding slightly.

Stomach in knots,

heart picks up.

Locker slams shut.

Looking up, smiling.

Let's go.

Walk slow,

make it last.

Quick peek at his face,

deep sigh.

Thanks.

Blink.

Back to reality.

Deep sigh.

Walking up to the lockers.

Tap on the shoulder.

Hi.

Oh, hey.

Where you going next?

Don't know.

Walk with me?

Sure.

Pointing fingers.

I'll be there.

Okay.

Walking back.

Gather my books.

Looking over heads.

Nowhere to be found.

I walk alone,

more upset than anything.

Later, I see you.

You left me alone.

Walk away.

Huh?

You left me. Alone.

My class was too far away, it made no sense.

Couldn't have told me?

Sorry.

I'm not speaking to you.

I bet you will.

Teasing, now.

I grin.

Yeah, I will.

You said if I was going that way... I went the opposite way, so I figured...

No, it's okay. You don't have to apologize to me. :)

Bye.

Bye.



Ta-da! XD Just to clear it up, he thought I meant only if we were walking the same way. We weren't, and I misunderstood. :) Hope you liked it!

4 comments:

  1. It's baaaaaaaaack.

    Anyway, I think this is very good, very creative. Sometimes the 'spur of the moment' stuff says a lot.

    :)

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  2. Sweet. A lot in between those lines...

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  3. i love it. read it when it first went up last night, but then it was gone before i could comment. lol. totally felt the moment. great piece of writing.

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